Write What Is Right [LATA]

I'm wondering if I've got the talent in writing.. hmmm

Recently I was inspired by a "human being" to be interested in writing. Since then, I have wrote several Literary works (If that's what you call it =P) which I want to post here. Most of it are written in Filipino which I am very much comfortable using. 

Lata

by: Ehm-Ehm

I

Ikaw ay pumasok sa isang malaking gusali

Maingay, Makulay, Madaming laman

Doon namili ka ng bagay na makakapagpatawid sa iyong pangangailangan

Nakita mo ako, nilapitan, pinuntahan

mura, masarap

Kaya't isa ako sa mga pinili mo at binayaran

II

Ako ay iyong binitbit

at mabilis na dinala sa iyong bahay

nilagay sa parihabang may bulaklakin na disenyo

naramdaman ko ang tigas ng kahoy na may apat na paa

at doon pinilit mo akong buksan

gamit ang mabibigat mong kamay

hawak ang matulis na bagay

pagkatapos ng ilang ikot

READ MORE

narating mo ang dulo

nakita ang sarap na iyong pinakahihintay

III

At pagkatapos

pagkaubos

Basta mo nalang akong itinapon

Hubad, at wala ng maitatago

sinipa sipa sa kalsada

niyupi, winasak

IV

Sa wakas may nagmagandang loob

sya ay napangiti nang ako'y makita

kinuha ako at hinawakan

isang batang lansangan

na muli na naman akong

pakikinabangan.

What's the mood of my poem? Arousal? Erotic? Well I didn't mean to do that. It was inspired by another poem entitled "Babolgam" and it seems interesting to make another one.

Prostitution is a widespread problem that the authorities find it hard to get rid of it.

If no man will patronize and pay a big money to them, then no one will do it.

It's a cycle. And everyone is involve.

Respect your woman and Respect yourself.

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